Thứ Năm, 29 tháng 10, 2009

To be honest,i don't exactly know what kind of job i will do in the future.But i have two big imaginations about the model of person which i wish to become.
first is a success business woman who usually wears Veston when she goes out to have a contract with partner,who is very independent and toughened.Because i saw a lot of Vietnam woman who married,they depend on the husband about the finance,decision,they just like a shadow of the man(when sun shines we just see the shadow of a man but when it rains or without sun,we could hardly see his shadow.i have many deep implications in this sentence).And i don't like that,i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the place of mine in society,i want everyone to respect and appreciate me.
second is a very active girl,who works as an interpreter or a tour guide,can speaks five languages fluently.To reach this level i have to try all my best because with two languages,i have had a lot of difficulties but five languages,it may be a mess.There are a lot of interesting things in the world that i haven't known so i want to discover them and may be in the future, the world would know a girl, whose name is NHI,she would have found out a new planet(who knows,right?).The important thing is i want to know more about the culture and personality of the foreigner.To do that,language is the need;it likes the key to open a new world,new sight.


( the sentence "...i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the...",the part:" i,myself" which i want to stress the meaning but i don't know is the grammar right,i just hear they use it on TV.)

thanks for your reading!!!
bless you!

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  1. hi Nhi, after reading your writing, I think you are much better than me. But I realise there are some mistakes. You should use Adj before a N (a success business,a tour guide).You also should consider the sentence "she would have found out a new planet",future not past.One more, when I read the sentence"they just like a shadow of the man", I understand but after reading you explan I don't understand. Any way, your writing is great. Forgive me if I'm wrong!(^_^)

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  2. "...i just hope that i,myself have my own career - gramatically correct.

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