To be honest,i don't exactly know what kind of job i will do in the future(1).But i have two big imaginations about the model of person which i wish to become.(2)
first is a success business woman(5) who usually wears Veston when she goes out to have a contract with partner(1),who is very independent and toughened(4).Because i saw a lot of Vietnam woman(1) who married,they depend on the husband about the finance,decision(2),they just like a shadow of the man(2)(when sun shines we just see the shadow of a man but when it rains or without sun,we could hardly see his shadow.i have many deep implications in this sentence(2)).And i don't like that,i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the place of mine in society,i want everyone to respect and appreciate me.(2)
second is a very active girl(5),who works as an interpreter or a tour guide,can speaks five languages fluently(1).To reach this level i have to try all my best because with two languages,i have had a lot of difficulties but five languages,it may be a mess.There are a lot of interesting things in the world (5)that i haven't known so i want to discover them and may be in the future, the world would know a girl, whose name is NHI,she would have found out a new planet(who knows,right?)(1).The important thing is i want to know more about the culture and personality of the foreigner.To do that,language is the need(5);it likes the key to open a new world,new sight.(2)

I have a deep impression on a woman (2)who is just 27 years old but she did such a great thing.(1)
She is my home teacher in English (5),her name is Dung.
She has a brown skin,short hair and looks very lovely.(4)
At the age of 27,but she is just like 18,very sweet and unaffected.
After graduated from University of Social and Human Sciences,she has had the passion with teaching.(2)
She used to work at a famous hotel (3)which is wanted to enter by lots of people with high salary.
When she told her professor and her family about her plan (2)which was saving all her money to build her own school to teach English(5),no one supported her and said that she must be dreamed.
But one year later,she did a thing which was thought that she just dreamed.(1)
She has her own school (2)which is named after her nick name: Captain Bear School.
And now she is preparing graduating with MA degree,then she will join in the PhD course.(1)
When i go to Captain Bear School(1),i don't feel like it's a strange place but a home,she just likes my sister(1),she shares everything to her students and through that,she gives a lot of her life's experiences.(2)


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To be honest,i don't exactly know what kind of job i will do in the future.But i have two big imaginations about the model of person which i wish to become.
first is a success business woman who usually wears Veston when she goes out to have a contract with partner,who is very independent and toughened.Because i saw a lot of Vietnam woman who married,they depend on the husband about the finance,decision,they just like a shadow of the man(when sun shines we just see the shadow of a man but when it rains or without sun,we could hardly see his shadow.i have many deep implications in this sentence).And i don't like that,i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the place of mine in society,i want everyone to respect and appreciate me.
second is a very active girl,who works as an interpreter or a tour guide,can speaks five languages fluently.To reach this level i have to try all my best because with two languages,i have had a lot of difficulties but five languages,it may be a mess.There are a lot of interesting things in the world that i haven't known so i want to discover them and may be in the future, the world would know a girl, whose name is NHI,she would have found out a new planet(who knows,right?).The important thing is i want to know more about the culture and personality of the foreigner.To do that,language is the need;it likes the key to open a new world,new sight.


( the sentence "...i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the...",the part:" i,myself" which i want to stress the meaning but i don't know is the grammar right,i just hear they use it on TV.)

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A person i admire

I have a deep impression on a woman who is just 27 years old but she did such a great thing.She is my home teacher in English,her name is Dung.She has a brown skin,short hair and looks very lovely.At the age of 27,but she is just like 18,very sweet and unaffected.

After graduated from University of Social and Human Sciences,she has had the passion with teaching.She used to work at a famous hotel which is wanted to enter by lots of people with high salary.When she told her professor and her family about her plan which was saving all her money to build her own school to teach English,no one supported her and said that she must be dreamed.

But one year later,she did a thing which was thought that she just dreamed.She has her own school which is named after her nick name: Captain Bear School.She just teaches at home but the number of student is now more than 400.To encourage her students who love English,every one just have to paid fee for a class but he could enter any class that he wants.

And now she is preparing graduating with MA degree,then she will join in the PhD course.I admire her because of her passion with teaching,maybe a little bit of headstrong and her character.When i go to Captain Bear School,i don't feel like it's a strange place but a home,she is just like my sister,she shares everything to her students and through that,she gives a lot of her life's experiences.She inspires me to complete myself.


(The girl wearing pink dress is ms.Dung.)

P/S: Through this,i want to advice you that you should do what you have passion with,and of course thinking consider before you decided to do something.


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