my hobby.

If you ask me which hobby that I like most, I will definitely answer that is enjoying the melody of music. I think there’s a lot of people have the same hobby as me.

In my opinion, Music is a miracle; it could cheer me up and also make me cry; the special thing I like most in music is it could release my sadness or stressful. You know I have a very strange solution to disappear my sadness and it sound very silly; that is turn the music on as loud as possible, and dance along to the melody of that song until I’m exhausted and my head is empty; Rock music could do this favor very excellent; furthermore, when you are at a party, music could make the environment more valuable.

I love all kinds of music, provided that it has a meaningful lyric or good melody. You know I used to cry after listening to a song because of its lyrics; such as:”hurt” by Christina Aguilera, “mama arms” …it’s about family love; it makes me love my parents more and appreciate their love; I could feel a mess, boring, blue world; moreover, I could see the gray color and the picture of that song in my imagination; I could take my spirit back when I was down through the song “my soldier” by AJ Rafael. I think music also improve our personality and our imagination.

I love listening to English song than teenage music in Vietnam nowadays. Otherwise, listening to music is also the way to improve my pronunciation more nature and sound like native voice, and my understanding the song in English. That’s what I want to share with you about my hobby.

my university-my class

if you ask me how do I feel when I first step into the university of technical education, I will answer that was an amazing emotion which couldn't be described by word, I am being in the great happiness of that but it's normal now. To be honest, everything comes to me is just my luck. In high school, my major is natural sciences; it means I mainly studied in chemistry, math and physics. I can't imagine that I could pass the exam and enter the University of Technical Education, it’s actually my luck.
And the reason I chose this school is very silly, I think. I do love English because I think it's the need in my life, to help my career gets higher, so I choose a school to learn English. At that time, I just knew about the faculty of foreign languages of the university of social sciences and humanities, I don't know any thing about that faculty of my being school now. However, the score to enter that university is too high, just for the excellent student but me; it gave me food for thought. And I accidentally knew about the University of Technical Education which has that major, it gave me the light of hope. I don't like English about technology because it seems so rigid for girl; but I still chose that school because it is near my house and haft a loaf is better than no bread, I know it's a very silly reason.
And when I officially go to school, at first, I thought that I’m hard to get along with my classmate; however, just a few weeks I found that we are very suit for each other. After working in group to make a play for speaking test, we became close-knit friends, but some of them are hard to get along. Now I have a lot of friends and I love my new friends very much.
Now, I can totally sure that I didn't make a wrong decision on choosing school. I’m enjoying my precious time in the University of Technical Education and having the best relationship.

Friendship.

Friends are the men who could make you laugh on the happiness but sometime they make you cry on the sorrow also; nevertheless, you can not exist in this world if you have no friend. I wish that the friendship is just easy and wonderful as a film; however, in the real, it’s not. Having a friend is hard and keeping a friendship is harder; especially the relationship between 2 girls. Just a little misunderstand could break the friendship.

When I was in 12th grade, almost the girls in the class hate me. I don't know the reason why but I treated them very well with all my heart. I hate those time and those memories I spent with them. When I came to the class, I just talked to myself; meanwhile, I refused to contact to them. That was the hard time for me because I had an exam to enter the university. However, I still have my best friends who are my classmate in 9th grade; they treat me very well and always comfort me. Sometime they are very hard, they scold me but I love that more than they just keep silence.

In fact, I decided to refuse to keep acquaintance with some girls in 12th grade because I know they don't like me and me either. Someone told me that I should pretend that we like each other and we are friend, it just like we're liar and the love they give me is just the compassion, and that compassion will easily change into the captiousness if I have any tiny mistake. In reality, I have to thanks to them for their behavior because it make me stronger now and also give me the reason to love my friends more and more.

now I’m in college already, I have more new friends and they treat me very well, I appreciate that I will try to keep those friendship forever like my friends in 9th grade.

Every family has their own situation(1) and their own way(1) to show their love(3) to each member(6). Mother is the woman who I love most. And my father, maybe he is not the man who feels the pain which is born me but he is the man who bring me up(3) beside the care of my mother.(2)

My father is a business and people say that business world(1) is a battlefield, there’s a lots of danger in his business(2), just a little mistake(1) could make him become money less(6). He has to suffer(3) the business's pressure(1) so it makes him become a man who has less smile. That also make me and my mother very sad, but now he try to happy(3) when he comes home.(2)

My mother is the wonderful woman(1); she is very weak inside but very strong outside. Her character is just known by me because she usually confides in me. Her heart is very extensive that's the reason why I love her most. I and my mother are incompatible; I don't know the reason why. Maybe I am very hard to please and my mother is easy. My mother usually told me that:" you are older than your age, a girl at 18 years old but you're just like a woman at 81 years old”. But I love to hear(3) that from her because I want her to know(3) that I love and care of her more than a daughter, maybe a mother perhaps. when I was a child I usually backtalk to her, but now I know that she just wants me to be better(6), so when she scolds me, I just keep silence but I’m not wrong and I still say that:” I’m sorry, I know I’m wrong”, and when she is calm down, I will say that:"I think you should...", and you know that it work very well.

Parents told me that the most beautiful moment(1) of their life (2)is to see the view I come to the university(6). Maybe I did make them happy but faculty of foreign languages is not the major that my father expected but he still encourages me a lots.

I know every success that I gain, the person who is happiest is my parents, and they look forward to seeing every step of mine(6). They have to face with(3) my mistake but don't neglect me because I’m their daughter. Now the time is short, so I am trying (3)to please(6) and not to disappointed them (6)because I want to show (3) that I love them and to repay their love.i am sure to say that if my parents are wrong or maybe becoming the evilest(5) in this world(2), I still love them.

Note:
(1) Noun phrase
(2) Prepositional phrase
(3) Verb phrase
(4) Participial phrase
(5) Gerund phrase
(6) Infinitive phrase

To be honest,i don't exactly know what kind of job i will do in the future(1).But i have two big imaginations about the model of person which i wish to become.(2)
first is a success business woman(5) who usually wears Veston when she goes out to have a contract with partner(1),who is very independent and toughened(4).Because i saw a lot of Vietnam woman(1) who married,they depend on the husband about the finance,decision(2),they just like a shadow of the man(2)(when sun shines we just see the shadow of a man but when it rains or without sun,we could hardly see his shadow.i have many deep implications in this sentence(2)).And i don't like that,i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the place of mine in society,i want everyone to respect and appreciate me.(2)
second is a very active girl(5),who works as an interpreter or a tour guide,can speaks five languages fluently(1).To reach this level i have to try all my best because with two languages,i have had a lot of difficulties but five languages,it may be a mess.There are a lot of interesting things in the world (5)that i haven't known so i want to discover them and may be in the future, the world would know a girl, whose name is NHI,she would have found out a new planet(who knows,right?)(1).The important thing is i want to know more about the culture and personality of the foreigner.To do that,language is the need(5);it likes the key to open a new world,new sight.(2)

I have a deep impression on a woman (2)who is just 27 years old but she did such a great thing.(1)
She is my home teacher in English (5),her name is Dung.
She has a brown skin,short hair and looks very lovely.(4)
At the age of 27,but she is just like 18,very sweet and unaffected.
After graduated from University of Social and Human Sciences,she has had the passion with teaching.(2)
She used to work at a famous hotel (3)which is wanted to enter by lots of people with high salary.
When she told her professor and her family about her plan (2)which was saving all her money to build her own school to teach English(5),no one supported her and said that she must be dreamed.
But one year later,she did a thing which was thought that she just dreamed.(1)
She has her own school (2)which is named after her nick name: Captain Bear School.
And now she is preparing graduating with MA degree,then she will join in the PhD course.(1)
When i go to Captain Bear School(1),i don't feel like it's a strange place but a home,she just likes my sister(1),she shares everything to her students and through that,she gives a lot of her life's experiences.(2)


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To be honest,i don't exactly know what kind of job i will do in the future.But i have two big imaginations about the model of person which i wish to become.
first is a success business woman who usually wears Veston when she goes out to have a contract with partner,who is very independent and toughened.Because i saw a lot of Vietnam woman who married,they depend on the husband about the finance,decision,they just like a shadow of the man(when sun shines we just see the shadow of a man but when it rains or without sun,we could hardly see his shadow.i have many deep implications in this sentence).And i don't like that,i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the place of mine in society,i want everyone to respect and appreciate me.
second is a very active girl,who works as an interpreter or a tour guide,can speaks five languages fluently.To reach this level i have to try all my best because with two languages,i have had a lot of difficulties but five languages,it may be a mess.There are a lot of interesting things in the world that i haven't known so i want to discover them and may be in the future, the world would know a girl, whose name is NHI,she would have found out a new planet(who knows,right?).The important thing is i want to know more about the culture and personality of the foreigner.To do that,language is the need;it likes the key to open a new world,new sight.


( the sentence "...i just hope that i,myself have my own career and assert the...",the part:" i,myself" which i want to stress the meaning but i don't know is the grammar right,i just hear they use it on TV.)

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A person i admire

I have a deep impression on a woman who is just 27 years old but she did such a great thing.She is my home teacher in English,her name is Dung.She has a brown skin,short hair and looks very lovely.At the age of 27,but she is just like 18,very sweet and unaffected.

After graduated from University of Social and Human Sciences,she has had the passion with teaching.She used to work at a famous hotel which is wanted to enter by lots of people with high salary.When she told her professor and her family about her plan which was saving all her money to build her own school to teach English,no one supported her and said that she must be dreamed.

But one year later,she did a thing which was thought that she just dreamed.She has her own school which is named after her nick name: Captain Bear School.She just teaches at home but the number of student is now more than 400.To encourage her students who love English,every one just have to paid fee for a class but he could enter any class that he wants.

And now she is preparing graduating with MA degree,then she will join in the PhD course.I admire her because of her passion with teaching,maybe a little bit of headstrong and her character.When i go to Captain Bear School,i don't feel like it's a strange place but a home,she is just like my sister,she shares everything to her students and through that,she gives a lot of her life's experiences.She inspires me to complete myself.


(The girl wearing pink dress is ms.Dung.)

P/S: Through this,i want to advice you that you should do what you have passion with,and of course thinking consider before you decided to do something.


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